I am learning to write to persuade others.
I showed examples statistics and evidence in my writing.
her is my write
Have you ever smoked before? It is so bad for you I would never do it ever. I think that smoking should be banned. Here are some facts about smoking and why it is not good for you. The real truth is that it eventually makes you have greasy skin, yellow teeth, yellow fingertips and wrinkles.
Naturally I feel that cancer of lungs and mouth, gangrene and emphysema costs taxpayers. To have a sick smoker in hospital costs a lot of money that money could go to cancer victims or sick children. The fact is that 4500-5000 die yearly from smoking in NZ.
Have you ever entered a smoker’s house?Their clothes, hair, house and car all smell of stale smoke. People don’t want to be around you. Carrying around a burning roll of paper and putting it in your mouth is not attractive to anyone around you.
We all know that it costs thousands of dollars a year. That money is better spent on a great holiday or toys for kids and you won’t be able to afford the things you need.
Most people would agree that smoking is pollution. If a cigarette butts is on the roadside, it takes years to break down and it is full of toxins. They are washed into the sea and poison the fish then we eat the fish and we get the toxins in our body.
It is a choice to live with clean air and I don’t think you should have to have second hand smoke from a smoker. I really think that you should quit smoking so you have a better life for you and other people around you thanks.
Hope you have learnt a little about smoking and why it is not good for you.